Love it!
I am first with fiveThen seven in the middle --Five again to end.:)
It's hard to limit myself to five/seven/five. I have a lot of words.
Cold fear grips my chestLoneliness endless pain sad tears she's goneI embrace love for redemption
They said they loved meBut hidden from me was the truthAnd I feel so ashamed
Beautiful and heartfelt, and that's what good poetry is.
Love it!
ReplyDeleteI am first with five
ReplyDeleteThen seven in the middle --
Five again to end.
:)
It's hard to limit myself to five/seven/five. I have a lot of words.
ReplyDeleteCold fear grips my chest
ReplyDeleteLoneliness endless pain sad tears she's gone
I embrace love for redemption
They said they loved me
ReplyDeleteBut hidden from me was the truth
And I feel so ashamed
Beautiful and heartfelt, and that's what good poetry is.
ReplyDelete